Describe A Moment In Time - Swamp

Hey Readers,

For the past few weeks we have been writing Describe a Moment in time,

to prepare ourselves for our writing e-astle at the end of the term.

This week we had to write about some tourists' who were paddling 

down a swamp in a canoe.

It was challenging thinking of what they could smell.

I enjoyed thinking of adjectives and phrases.

Here is my work:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Ofnn-KK44uGUG1kWvWCyaC9h34GPPI4W9pJEt-N-czs/edit 

Describe a moment in time

This term Miss . Bannans writing group have been focusing on describe a moment in time.

Week 1 
Week 2

Week 3
This weeks